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My story: Crazy World

Post by Synchronicity on Wed Aug 06, 2008 2:01 am

Well i was debating as to weather post up the story I'm writing here just becuase it's pretty damn off base from Tommy, and that on this forum not everyone may agree with my political beliefs.

Anyway I'm writing this story called Crazy World. It's a sociopolitical story about human rights, like love mostly. Just in case you didn't guess with the whole Brokeback mountain icon in my sig, and the how my account name used to be "ThrowingUpRainbows" I'm really pro-gay rights. So if you don't agree with that...then just ignore this post. Also if this is to political or controversial SneakGlove can delete it.

Chapter 1:http://throwinguprainbows.deviantart.com/art/1-Down-the-Butterfly-Hole-91580189
Chapter 2:http://throwinguprainbows.deviantart.com/art/CW2-Immoral-Flowers-92865139

Also please don't hesitate to tell me what you think. this is the rough draft mode, so please go ahead and say what you liked, and what you didn't!


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Post by Sneakglove on Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:32 am

I have no problem with you posting this here, but it is a little long, so I will read it later if you don't mind. I will let you know what I think then. Wink

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Post by Sneakglove on Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:12 am

Ok, I read Chapter 1 and it's very good. I would love to see it as a Manga, I think it would work very well, also it would great to see pictures of the girls new costumes. Do you know any illustrators?

One comment, aren't all 3 girls tall for Japanese girls? Ok, 5ft6 is ok, and I understand why Kiyoka is tall, but Saya's 5ft9 also is very tall for a Japanese girl. Look at Tommy, she is 5ft4, and I think thats actually above average (The average height for females in Japan is 5ft2, males are 5ft7). Is this intentional or not?

Sorry to be so pinickity.

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Post by Synchronicity on Sun Oct 05, 2008 8:03 pm

oh i just saw your post Sneaky!

Well thank you a bunch, and in fact the original plan was for it to be a manga. but i kinda don't know how to make manga at this point in my life, so i just decided to write the story out. I'm starting to develop my own ways of making manga, so maybe sometime when i have a lot of time i'll start making it.

and here's the pic of the three girls: http://throwinguprainbows.deviantart.com/art/Crazy-World-93966135
Momoko's in the middle.

Yeah, you're the second person to point that out to me. Tis true, Tis true, they are quite tall for Japanese girls.
Saya's the only uber un-realistic, but that's just a thing of mine, i love making uber tall female characters. I don't know why, but I do. My guys are usually average, and my girls are either their height or taller. I might change it to make Saya half German or something. whatever. for now i think it's fine, but as it's written They all are born in Japan, and of Japanese descent (well with the exception of kiyoko)

Also chapter three is FINALLY Up, this chapter took awhile, I hope to get chapter 4 up sooner.
So no i did not abandon this story, I'm sticking with it! Very Happy
http://throwinguprainbows.deviantart.com/art/Crazy-World-3-Winding-Road-99902626
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